My own Journal

My FictionPress story, titled 'My Original Story' has 1 review.  The person who reviewed is called 'A.R.B', this reviewer gave constructive criticism, which I'm cool about.  I realise that it had too much information on their jobs, which is what this reviewer told me.  They also told me I was pacing the story a bit fast, heehee, I can't help it, it just seems stupid to just leave them as just some person they know.  To cut a long story short, I kinda had an impulse to pace this story really fast and have them be friends already, and just acted on it.  I'm so dumb, that chapter was rushed like hell and just given a once-over before being submitted *hits self in head with a piece of cardboard* bad me, bad me, BAD ME!!!!!!!!!  eheh, that was just because I realised how stupid it was.  I'll have to do better next time.  Hmm, I know I put too much info, I just cant really help it sometimes.

Remember that stat check from last night?
The hit count rose, AGAIN, by 3 this time.

I got a haircut today.  It's much shorter than my original hairstyle, and I now have a fringe again.  It's cool, imo.

as the title says, this is a rant entry.

I hate Kaito, so I'm going to put a rant entry in about it.  I hate his fucking guts.  He's not supposed to have even been Lucia's crush in the first fucking place!  I couldn't give a flying fuck if I get shit for posting this.  The fact still stands that I hate Kaito a lot.  I mean, come on, he's dumb.  So yeah.  Kaito could go drown for all I care.  I just wish Kaito would freeze himself or burn himself and die.  I hate how Kaito was even Lucia's first love.  I hate everything about him, including the fact that he fucking surfs!  Kaito is a big fat shithead.  Even if KaitoxLucia is a canon pairing, I FUCKING HATE IT!  Also, I think Kaito might be gay.

I couldn't give a flying fuck if I get shit for this entry.  I just want to get that off my chest.

Nothing much to say.  Would you believe it if I told you his fic was 60 pages long?  So, yeah, that's longer than all the chapters of my fic put together.  Apparently, it's called "Fic-Sun, Moon and Earth".  It's pretty good, several parts of it made me want to laugh my ass off.  But it has a few spelling mistakes.  It appears he wasn't offended by this simple comment, which is good.

I posted it yesterday.  It's longer than chapter 3.  I thought my first entrance sucked.  The disclaimer was pretty decent, since Rina did the disclaimer this time.  My second entrance made me want to crack up laughing.  It's just sooooooo funny.  I made Kaito heavy! lol.  I just love how I made the Black Beauty Sisters drop into my fic, seemingly by accident.  That was just because I got really bored.  The enlarged end of the chapter was pretty funny.

I started writing chapter 4 for my Q&A.  Only spoiler I will give you is that Lucia smacks Kaito upside the head, which is pretty hilarious, imo.  I'm looking forward to posting it if I feel that it's completed.

Well, I thought this was all good.  I also noticed that it's longer in words than chapter 1 and 2 put together, which is something I'm pleased of.  I gave it a thorough read-through twice while editing it on FFN, then posted it.  I must say, it's better, and I made Lucia and Hanon pull a surprise prank on me, then do the disclaimer as punishment.  I also bolded the votes at the end so people can see what the vote standing is at clearly.  Seems some people like it.

first off, I thought my entrance (flying in through a portal) was nearly a complete rip-off from andriod 24's Q&A.  If she's reading this, I apoligise greatly, but I didn't have any other ideas for the entrance.  Second, my greeting sounded pretty silly imo.  I mean come on, "Hi everyone! What’s up?"  I could have done better than that!  Well, that can't be helped.  I have no idea why I made Rina guess that we had questions straight off the bat, other than the fact that imo, Rina's not as clueless as Lucia.  The disclaimer was better, imo, simply because I bolded the whole thing (I listen to my desktop publishing teacher too much.  Might as well tell you that she's named Miss Schwarz).  I bolded the questions to tell them apart from the answers.  Good thing too, otherwise I would have confused the people reading my fic, and I sure as hell can't have that happening.  Well, that's all, the rest of the chapter is good, imo.

If you read the first status check I'll tell you this, it rose.  By 2.